Review Detail of DaoOfDao in Alexander Prince - Half Blood Potter
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Very interesting with a unique take on the finding out of the Magical World, different from Harry’s. There are some minute errors but they could be overlooked. I have read some comments and I want to say that this is a novel that has *highest potential* into becoming one of the best or The Best Harry Potter Fanfic. So please don’t comment on what the author should or should not do because that would interfere with what the author has planned. Only write those kinds of comments when the author is asking for some recommendations. Also Author, few comments doesn’t mean the entirety of the readers. Some readers just don’t like commenting. I can’t make you not change your story because of us readers but I can remind you that this is your story and some novels haves turned out badly because they listened to what the readers proposed and they didn’t know what to do after and they just made some random, inconsistent s***. So keep on writing how you wanted it to turn out. So far, the story has been great. Good Job.
Alexander Prince - Half Blood Potter
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Currently at Ch16 and I have to tell you that I am not disappointed. I have a (bad?, maybe) habit of trying to predict how the stories will progress (don't worry about spoilers? as I keep them to myself) and I'm proud to say that I get most of them correct. But being proud doesn't mean happy. Because since I could guess where the stories are going, I just get bored and tired of reading them. This book isn't one of those stories. At the beginning of each sections, I thought that I had the rough idea of what was going to happen, but as I continued reading, I started to second guess myself for there is no 'Yes' or 'No' answer in this novel. The only choice that could be found is 'or'. What I mean is that I could never be sure of where the path leads. I could predict left and right but when I chose to walk right, a new path suddenly emerges. What I said may sound hackneyed, but this is what readers seek. We seek to destroy this vapid, jejune cage that confines our trapped creativity. The greatest story I believe is a tree that sustains a plethora of branches that spreads out in every direction in which one of them will eventually lead to an unimaginably satisfying destination. This novel is a sapling and we need to water it, to take care of it. I don't want it to suddenly drop, I mean to fall down and crash for some unknown reason. I don't know if it's obvious, but I have very high hopes for this story.
DaoOfDao:Currently at Ch16 and I have to tell you that I am not disappointed. I have a (bad?, maybe) habit of trying to predict how the stories will progress (don't worry about spoilers? as I keep them to myself) and I'm proud to say that I get most of them correct. But being proud doesn't mean happy. Because since I could guess where the stories are going, I just get bored and tired of reading them. This book isn't one of those stories. At the beginning of each sections, I thought that I had the rough idea of what was going to happen, but as I continued reading, I started to second guess myself for there is no 'Yes' or 'No' answer in this novel. The only choice that could be found is 'or'. What I mean is that I could never be sure of where the path leads. I could predict left and right but when I chose to walk right, a new path suddenly emerges. What I said may sound hackneyed, but this is what readers seek. We seek to destroy this vapid, jejune cage that confines our trapped creativity. The greatest story I believe is a tree that sustains a plethora of branches that spreads out in every direction in which one of them will eventually lead to an unimaginably satisfying destination. This novel is a sapling and we need to water it, to take care of it. I don't want it to suddenly drop, I mean to fall down and crash for some unknown reason. I don't know if it's obvious, but I have very high hopes for this story.
