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Review Detail of Rudem in The First Order

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Rudem
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It's a great story with a few "small" problems that made me abandon it. The MC is practically forced to guide a bunch of people to a certain place, when they get there they are taken by surprise and discover that it is a very dangerous place, instead of making it clear to those people that he would not go deeper into that place and that he would wait until the wolves left to come back he decides that the best course of action is to follow those people who don't care about his life and who clearly have elusive goals in this place, but why? He has nothing to do there! What irritated me most was the fact that he knew that every death situation he entered could end up harming the person he cared about most, his brother, including killing him. In that place there were only 5 people left, 3 who were strong and 2 who were "weak", the 2 strong decided to separate after realizing that they had entered the territory of a super force and left the MC with the 2 "weak" the MC instead of killing these two who forced him to be in that dangerous place and humiliated him, he left them there to be captured, they were captured and reported to this super force all the other 3 who came with them, they even incited their captors to kill the MC. The MC manages to survive because of the plot armor, he runs back because he discovers that all the monsters that were in that place are heading towards his city so he saves his brothers and a friend's family. Now let's talk about his system, he becomes strong by earning sincere thanks, when the monsters attacked his city the people ran away and he had crucial information about the monsters and enough strength to help some people and receive their sincere thanks, but he decided to keep quiet and not take advantage of the best chance he had to become stronger. Stupid, right? This all happened in just a few chapters, it was already getting on my nerves but then came the reason I abandoned this novel, he saved the brother of the guy who caused this whole disaster, he saved this guy who didn't care if he lived and died, one of the bosses of that super force that caused the disaster and this guy wanted to kill one of the few people who helped the MC, and they become friends, lol. I went to see the spoilers trying to find out if one day he would take revenge on the people who put his and his brother's lives at risk and what I discovered made me feel angry, he has a romance with one of these people and becomes friends with everyone else, lol. For those people who dared to compare this to Lord of the Mysteries, you need a psychiatrist, go get help!

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Rudem
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I forgot to make one thing clear, the MC is not between being good or bad, he is just stupid, and he keeps doing stupid things. If you want to know if he is good or bad, i will ask you a question, an armed person sees a student entering school carrying firearms, he decides to watch this disaster happen, is he good or bad? For me he is clearly a bad person, as bad as that student, i'm not saying that a person should put themselves at risk to help others, but that they should help when there is no risk to them, If they don't so they are bad, If they do It even with risk, they are good. Some people said that he becomes a hero later, that's not what I wanted, I would like to see him being forced to do good things to get stronger and acting in a smart and ruthless way. This is another great story that was wasted by the author, like God's Eyes, Rise of the Black plain, World Dominating System... Good premises, good stories, but poor development, I feel like they don't want to be a great author, but they're just writing.