Review Detail of Jack_Smith_3423 in ~Birth of a Legend

This review may change in the future, who knows. I'm only 15 chapters in. I'm not gonna lie: the story is good and interesting. I love a good Reincarnation story. The characters are mildly interesting. At least I'm not seeing the cliche of every single character hating the MC for no good reason. There are a few grammar hiccups, but the writing style is good. Now, the author doesn't seem to have a firm grip on updating. I suspect we'll be getting either 2 to 3 chapters a week, which is okay. The pacing is a bit off. Some moments are rushed and others take too long. Luckily, there are not many of those scenes in the book. As I said before, the characters are mildly interesting and they don't all seem to hate the MC. What hate he does get is entirely his own fault because he's a snarky twit. The MC lived a bad life before, but the author doesn't try to shove this down our throats. They give us a bit of information, namely when the MC us moaning about the bad choices he made. I hope I see some growth in the future. I think I'll write another one as the story progresses, to see if it gets better.