The story line of this book is gripping and the characters are well written. Jasmin creates characters who are so well written i can feel their seperate motives, quirks, and personalities. The plot is intruguing and has kept me reading daily (im into the 3rd book now). As with most long running series’, the plot loses focus occasionally, but overall the story is driven and interesting. The writing suffers from major errors of both grammar and syntax (and the odd typo as well) - often distracting but rarely confusing. A good editor would bring this story to hard-copy publishing quality. If this book were offered in hard copy, I would purchase it.
JasmineJosef
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