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So you killed his childhood friend and his first love... The development of this story is just unsatisfying... he reincarnated but don't get any kind of powerup and he doesn't use any kind of knowledge from his previous life to make a better foundation for himself... he travelled alone and almost died on his first day of adventure and barely make it safe with the help of werewolf and after some fighting here and fighting there with lizardmen and necromancer he decided to come back and put himself on the front line against a vampire lord and then he been framed by his kingdom as the killer of his childhood love and after that, he gets into the prison to discover the fact that he has a child with his elf friend.... and here I stopped reading because the development is far from acceptable its awful development...

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Collin's Otherworld Adventure

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I'm sorry you didn't like how things developed, still appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story even if you disliked it