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Review Detail of MrHit in Birth of the Demonic Sword

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MrHit
MrHitLv22yrMrHit

Yea I remember why i dropped this series, I read to the party where he was stuck underground i think with his 'wife' and a good 10 chapters was them 'smooching' and the author desperately trying to make the character more 'human' even though the entire development of the story was contradictory to that. Didn't make much sense, made the whole story annoying to read ect ect dropped it so there's your warning. Not sure if this issue is addressed and worked on but at the same time I don't have the patient to sit and read through all of the cringy romance.

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Birth of the Demonic Sword

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Nuwang
NuwangLv12Nuwang

chaos heir is much better then this I tried getting into this story 3 times because chaos heir is one of the best stories on this platform xD

MrHit
MrHitLv2MrHit

While personally i wouldn't consider it the best its defiantly far better than whatever this is meant to be

Nuwang:chaos heir is much better then this I tried getting into this story 3 times because chaos heir is one of the best stories on this platform xD
Nuwang
NuwangLv12Nuwang

chaos heir is the only story who's main protagnist feels extreamly dynamic from the webnovels I've read. also the intruge of mana is really nice to. the pacing of the story is also extrodinary I think. I want to get into the birth of the demonic sword but it really does not hot a spot for me. really impressive though how much the author improved over the years.

MrHit:While personally i wouldn't consider it the best its defiantly far better than whatever this is meant to be