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Review Detail of JadeMonkey in Birth of the Demonic Sword

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JadeMonkey
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First 600 chapters tell a fantastic story. Good pacing with character and world developments. On the other hand, once you get to 1000+ It’s dragging on the story like a massive blue ball. Seems almost most like the author doesn’t want to progress anymore or the vision for the novel just nose dived into the abyss. For example, if there’s 6 enemies. There will be a chapter for each enemy. The fight is pretty much filler at this point. No need for 6 enemies to have a chapter and a half each. The fight has nothing related to drive the story forward, they’re just fodder enemy. You won’t remember them later and the story never talks about them again. It’s like ready an essay where they’re just filling in for word count. Lastly, it’s been over 1000 chapters and he “STILL” hasn’t reached god hood yet. He’s been on the lower plane for more than 1200 chapters now. The story is super slow pace at this point. Started off good but now it’s just crawling by. Probably another few hundred more years until he reaches the next level. BTW im currently 1226. He should’ve gone to the immortal lands after he absorbed all those raw laws and banished King Elbas.

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GoldenKitsune
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moneyyy he wants more money [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

hungerpig
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too many spoilers dude

madtitan
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Is the romance good? Bcs it so stupid and doesn’t make sense

KHAJIQUE_KELLY
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Which chapter did the make clear they have like each other ?

madtitan:Is the romance good? Bcs it so stupid and doesn’t make sense