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The only reason Writing Quality is a 4 Star instead of 5 is because some things can get a bit long winded during explanations. Don't get me wrong on it however, I enjoy that but I know a lot of people who don't, to me it show you put thought into how you want things to be explained instead of just rushing through them. Everything else is 5 Stars due to you having a schedule and sticking to it unless something happens or like the anniversary where you released an extra chapter, the story development shows you've researched what you are writing about and try to get everything to roughly line up with the world the story takes place,even if the concept wasn't in the world to begin with. Character design is great, you have characters that have flaws and to me it makes them seem more authentic, you also have it so they work on them which is another great thing. World background as I said towards the top you research the world to make things seem more natural so that is a solid, and considering you want to quite possibly take this to other worlds as long as the same detail is put into each of them as the Danmachi world I will be extremely happy to continue reading this story. Overall the story is awesome, if time is needed to ensure that it continues to be as it is in coming chapters than by all means take however long you need, just let us know so we aren't stuck in limbo waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue to have fun writing this story in the future.
Wish Fulfillment System
Shiro_the_Hero
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You're 100% correct, I really do have a propensity for being long-winded in my writing. Some people really don't enjoy that, but I'm glad we both do. So in a way, this 4.5/5 review is, imo, the ideal one someone interested in the story should read. You didn't only look at your own opinion, you also took other people's opinions into account and adjusted your scores accordingly - that's honestly impressive! I'm extremely happy you like my story and characters this much. And I hope I'll be able to breathe even more life into them in the chapters to come. As for the research, I'm glad it paid off! Although my DanMachi world is only very similar to the DanMachi world we know on the surface (thanks to me changing... well... a hell of a lot of things so it'll fit the story I want to tell), it's good that it's still able to pull you in and make you slowly accept the changes. As for future worlds, I can say that I plan for at least half of them to be entirely original ones, mostly because it gives me so much more freedom to plan things. I would have never gotten into fanfiction at all if I hadn't suddenly wanted to tell the story of someone being in love with Ais Wallenstein and Ereshkigal, for pure wish fulfillment purposes xD I'll do my best in all the new worlds as well, although it'll still take quite some time to get there. I won't unnecessarily rush things, don't worry. I'd rather take calm and steady steps forward. And unless I'll have a health emergency that makes it impossible for me to keep you all up to date, I promise to not let you be stuck in limbo, waiting for an update. I can't stand when people do this, so I'll always keep you posted. Speaking of, maybe I should really make a Discord server? Although it'd be a pain to moderate, it'd at least give me a place where I can post updates and people could come there to search out news should I be late or missing (ᇂ_ᇂ )