Review Detail of Ye_QXiu in - Abandoned

Shameless (But not so shameless) Author review! Tbh I don't know if this is really at a 5, but it feels wrong to give myself anything other then a 5 so.... Shameless author I guess. (Tee Hee) (UwU) Anyways, I'm a bit of a beginner, so go easy on me, but I'd love any and all advice. Pangu's Dilemma is a bit of a Dilemma for me as an author too you know! It's a bit of a weird topic, so it's hard to make it smooth while having something that isn't just, oh he did a, then a, then a, THEN B!, then a again.... The writing style is also a bit neat I think, sorry if I have any flaws. Anyway, show me some love won'tcha!