Review Detail of Tee16 in Fate Online: Shadow

some transitions between chapters are confusing and make no sense l. I think there are 2 such in the first 100 chapters. where the following chapter is in a completely different setting, action he is doing and where he is. this again happens at chapter 110 going into 111. how the heck did him sneaking into the cave, killing 1 bandit, transition to home now suddenly fighting the people chasing him for killing the bandit boss. it's so confusing at times. also a proof reader is needed, there are minor issues that need fixed. overall a good novel.