Review Detail of akimisa in The Villain's Wife

The kind of story i feel horible after reading it, i keep skip from one chapter to 10 chapter, the story is not that bad actually but, my honest review is that i dont like it. The enemy keep coming The ML and MC just killing everyone even for a simple matter Inconsistency (the grandmother organization? Oh why not make her child not dying or something?) Lily kidnapping arc? Leaving small baby and just going to somewhere? And in the end ML and MC died And instead their friend just stay alive, ending become something that u would hate, and aftertaste its really horible Eh what he become immortal or something? Not age not feel pain Just if i can said is that this story Face slaping, killing, enemy everywhere, hidden danger Just please make short story rather than long story that keep looping. Honestly i hate it, and i feel horible because reading this taking my time, i can just read another novel. Dont take me wrong, even i cant make story this complicated