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So I really like parts of this book and exploring the world the author has created, but there are just some staggering let-downs that I just can't get over. I am up to chapter 718 and dont plan to continue because there is no improvement from chapter 1 to now so I don't see a reason to continue. The world background and story development is interesting enough to keep me reading through 700 chapters of poor comedy attempts, bad dialogue, and no planning. I hate this because I really enjoy looking into Reilli's own world and exploring the world with them, but at the same time I have to sit through seemingly torturous writing to explore it. The comedy is god awful and just repeated over and over. It is just unbearable hearing the same comedy dialogue over hundreds of chapters and tens of hours of reading. It is never creative and it doesn't get any better. There are novels out there that do much better with jokes, funny writing and one liners out there, I wish the author would improve on this. The worst joke in this series, where Shiro is practically bragging about her achievements, is just like NTR to me, as it just makes this novel unreadable. The characters are so shallow and most of the time only seem to serve one purpose until the author can think of something else to just magically write to make it seem to have more depth than it does, for example, Madi at the beginning only had 1 dialogue to input and that was to comment on Lyrica's and Shiro's relationship. There are some mistakes here and there and the spelling/names of things change sometimes which is a little annoying but it is what it is, it is readable and you won't care most of the time. I pray the author improves on some things but maybe it is just me with these thoughts as chapter 700 still has a stable following so maybe they are just into this sort of writing.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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