Review Detail of TomTang in Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Item: Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Rating: 2.8

Review detail

TomTangLv34yrTomTang

The grammar isn't bad. However, the plot is a bit too undeveloped. It is unable to make any emotional changes to my mind. All in all, it is too unrealistic and predictable.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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Rohen_TharLv1Rohen_Thar

Fully agree, the most used sentence; "with her legs crossed".

Jesse_Webbeking:Yeah, I have to refute that. Not only is the grammar terrible, the choice in wording is extremely repetitive and the context of words and phrases used is often completely incorrect.

2yr

aceattorneyLv5aceattorney

Incorrect. The grammar is, in fact, quite bad.

4yr

GoatqueenlolLv2Goatqueenlol

I hate the fact that stories like these,that have the same plot are doing so good when underrated authors have a much better storyline and character development. (Grammar as well)

3yr

Jesse_WebbekingLv1Jesse_Webbeking

Yeah, I have to refute that. Not only is the grammar terrible, the choice in wording is extremely repetitive and the context of words and phrases used is often completely incorrect.

3yr