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Review Detail of TomTang in Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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TomTang
TomTangLv34yrTomTang

The grammar isn't bad. However, the plot is a bit too undeveloped. It is unable to make any emotional changes to my mind. All in all, it is too unrealistic and predictable.

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Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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aceattorney
aceattorneyLv5aceattorney

Incorrect. The grammar is, in fact, quite bad.

Goatqueenlol
GoatqueenlolLv2Goatqueenlol

I hate the fact that stories like these,that have the same plot are doing so good when underrated authors have a much better storyline and character development. (Grammar as well)

Jesse_Webbeking
Jesse_WebbekingLv1Jesse_Webbeking

Yeah, I have to refute that. Not only is the grammar terrible, the choice in wording is extremely repetitive and the context of words and phrases used is often completely incorrect.

Rohen_Thar
Rohen_TharLv1Rohen_Thar

Fully agree, the most used sentence; "with her legs crossed".

Jesse_Webbeking:Yeah, I have to refute that. Not only is the grammar terrible, the choice in wording is extremely repetitive and the context of words and phrases used is often completely incorrect.