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BL00DY
BL00DYLv42yrBL00DY

Story is really interesting, but Author is making to many mistakes be it grammar or story line. You clearly written it in first chapters that versatile class need 2 times more exp but later from lvl 1 to 2 he need 5k exp so I suppose it should be normally 2,5k for other classes but no you write that normal class need only 1k and like, I won't write who, write that he need somehow 5 times more exp to lvl up... to that for each lizard kill notification showed that he got 5 SP + 5 bonus SP its 10 I saw at least 3 notifications like this so it makes 30 he got lvl 2 that makes 6k exp so 15 kills 15*400=6k now tell me if he got 10 SP for kill why did you make him have 31 SP in total after 15kills? And how tf he got 1 SP? I read 11chapters and there are too many mistakes on your part and to that you aren't even correcting them when someone pointed them out. These parts of story are fucking essential so maybe correct then for fuck sake. And I written only about most annoying mistakes, there are many more.

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Kyosei
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Thank you for the review and for pointing out the inconsistencies in the novel. Since I am always busy with IRL matters, I have no time to review what is right and wrong especially in the beginner chapters. I was hoping some of the readers can point it out so that I can either change it or clarify it. Also, the grammar is like that since it has been a few years since I have written it and I have yet to edit the mistakes present. I was still a greenhorn at that time and English is not my first language. I also apologize you had trouble understanding some of it. Thank you.