Review Detail of KingGrizzly in Obito's Mangekyō in Anime World

I can see this has potential to be one of my the best fan-fics out there, but it is clearly going down the multiverse/omniverse route and that usually ends with the story getting off track with the story in my opinion and ruins it. It introduces new variables to the story that can sometimes ruin it. While from what I read it will be a while before it gets ruined so I will just sit back and enjoy the ride... and throw myself off the ride when it gets too ridiculous. It's a good story so far from what I read, I enjoyed it so go ahead and read it as its a great story. The only problem I have with this story is that it is a harem, while I don't mind a harem that's only when they do it right, btw author, don't make Shiba Miyuki Leon's lover as I feel it's better if she stays with her brother instead, I just feel like she would not stray from her brother as well due to their past.