Review Detail of Aysel_Inara in Lily Green
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The character seem shut in a shell. You lack vocabulary and the emotions are neglected throughout. The surroundings are omitted making it poor understanding of where everything is happening. Though I found the storyline interesting but with proper editing and a little focus on certain things this could be far better. GOOD LUCK ❤
Lily Green
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I think, there was some glitch with my rating otherwise I wouldn't have given such low scores, when its readable. 🤗🤔
lalalahouse:Thank you so much I'll work on it
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Aysel_Inara:I think, there was some glitch with my rating otherwise I wouldn't have given such low scores, when its readable. 🤗🤔