Review Detail of kingotaku in RETRY: Going Back in Time to Play Basketball

I like the way you started the novel and I think that you can improve further by just concentrating to the main story. I'm not saying you're not but for the future refrain from doing many filler chapter. I'm not a good reviewer and I'm only saying this for my enjoyment, it may sound selfish but hey who isn't... I really like it dawg so try not to drop it