Review Detail of ElionAVL in Divine Ascension - First Volume

Hello, AVL here with YET another story... or more exact a 'rewrite' of the original version, since the original one has been inactive for months. There is a medium chance I'll stop writing if we don't get to top 250 in two weeks though :V Anyway, this is a story about my mc, Zephyr and his journey through the world of Asmodea or something like that. Surprise; he ain't that op.