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Yoongi_Min_1722
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author ur imagination about this story and the whole plot is too good I love the way u r changing ur writing style and adding more and different emotions . but author there are some points I want u to work on 🤗 1: if ur adding a new problem to there situation I want u to solve it first and then add another problem .I know it doesn't happen in real life but these are fantasy and we want something shooting that can help us to relax adding more and more problems without solution is something thriller but at some point we lost the interacting emotions with the story😣☹️ 2: second I suggest u to show war in less chapters with vivid emotions it will look great cuz expanding chapters with war isn't something readers are chilled with they probably like to read it short and😘🥺 compatable 3: I really love Raphael I want u to make him back in the story with the help of hope .I really cried 2 buckets of tears cuz of this I really hope u will make this happen. 😢😢 and last but not the least 4: I will recommend u to add more skinships between characters like more pda and Plzz make jedrike forgot about safrina ....🙍‍♀ I am recommending this book to many of my friends and I know I am being selfish 😄but u r the first ever author I am chatting and to be frank I had never read Lycan before hope u will do these changes .I am suggesting u becuz ur one of my favorite author and I myself write poems and some fictions.i am just giving u a little piece of my taste .also I want rain and torak more and more there in traction and pda and skinships they r my favorite couple after all 😍my final exams r coming that's why I want this novel to end soon so that I can stop my wild imagination and can score some good marks.. love u author nim 💜💜

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Wow! thank you so much for your honest review! ((^o^)) it is very detail and nice to read. i like it! 1. All the problems will be solved in the end of the story, but maybe it takes too long since there are some problems that needed to be solved in the other season, but thank you to pointing this out, i will think carefully about this when i write another story ^^ 2. Thank you, don't worry, the war will end soon, since we will reach the end of the story (probably) by the end of next month. 3. I am sorry for make you cry... but, in war, you dont know who you will lose... i want to portray this... *hug* 4. hhihihihih... will do this. *smirk* thank you so much, your support meant a lot for me! *hug tighter* i would like to read your poem and story ^^ Serefina said; focus with your study and come back with good marks, girl! ^^

Yoongi_Min_1722
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Thanku author borahe it's means There will be a season 2 of this book. and if yes then I hope that this season has an satisfactory and complete end.. 🥰Luv u author nim