The premise is good, but that is all. Don't waste your time. For the author: you had a good idea, but I suggest you scrapp this over and start again. I would like to read it if you ever learn how to tell a proper history. And to be clear, this is not a genre problem. The history itself just isn’t constructed in a satisfying way.
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