I voted it as Above average since I read better things than this but the story was actually good I can see big f&cking potential in your story if you get an editor. Unfortunately the release is slow, if this is 2 chapter everyday than I may add points for that. The feeling I get from your story is a never ending crave for more. so that’s it for me and good luck on your story.
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