Author here! This story is basically my take on Attack on Titan with similar story but some stuff added in.
Well it won’t be fun if I spoil it so go read!
+Shamless 5 star review
It's your novel so you can do what ever you want with it so don't listen to what the others say thay want the novel to be like. Just do it as you like. Oh your novel is very good as mach i read.