Review Detail of rodrigo_melo in The Fastest Man Alive - Marvel

Well, what can i say... the story is not baaaad, but it's not good. The story has 0 development for secondary characters, i know it's a FF but you at least have to make some effort so it makes sense for the secondary act at a certain way with the protagonist, feels like you have a stair, and then you jumped straight to the top of her, jumping all the way. The protagonist is too inconsistent, sometimes he is confident and cold, sometimes he acts like a teenage like when he meet Raven for the first time, that was really cringe. The dialog is really bad, but this is the author's first novel so i can see he getting better. Author spend to much time explaining Flash power and how it works, we already know that dude, no need to make an entire chapter just to explain it, there's always a google. As i said, the story started really rushed, like the athor didn't wanted to start Mc's romance from the beginning. When the story started the Mc already had everything he would need to have power, and them 'boof' he is an omega level just like, that was too easy, but that was my personal opnion since i would enjoy more to see the protagonist own what he got. The good thing is that the chapters are really big.