Review Detail of JacksonWalker in Feral Confessions - Adrianna And The Alpha

Dear MishaK Like with most people, there are small grammatical errors; as well as some extra words that are completely unneeded. These are not that big of a deal, and the writing style and grammar is great. I have to say though, improvement is improvement, as long as you can improve your grammar a little bit, you should do it. The same goes for getting rid of unneeded words. I can't judge your story line, as I am not huge on romance and that would be unfair to you; who I can tell is great at what they do, but I can tell from the comments on this story and your past experience that it should be great. Sincerely, Jackson M. Walker