The background of the story is new and interesting , but the character development sucked.. One chapter a character is described as a hopeless romantic and the right next chapter he's the blackened villain who wants to take away the female from the male lead.. It's later said that the said character has multiple personality.. Like wtf author, don't introduce new plots just to finish a chapter.. I have to admit I was hooked to this for the first 30 chapters.. Then it was all a twisted roller coaster. How can a grown up man be injected with the cure without any restraints, a said man is the strongest and the most brilliant in the whole empire.. Its such a shame that a good story will be lost in plot holes and even badder plot armour.. But had fun reading.. Would I be reading the sequel to this.. Heck no.. Don't want to go down that rabbit hole.. Please my dear author, just have an outline of the story before u put it down in words, u have great imagination.. But it didn't exactly showed up in the finished work.. U even forgot some characters half way through.. So sorry for being this critical.
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