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Gourmet_DAOLv74yrGourmet_DAO

I could have limited a couple of sentences. Without reading the chapters themselves. But this would not be a full review, it would not be fair with respect to the author, who has spent his time writing a novel. He expects from the review not so much advancement in the rating (ideally, of course) but how the reader evaluates his work. what thoughts does he have after reading the story of the author. If this is possible, the reader points out errors from his point of view, as the author grows and develops. Well, this is my view of the review. As I wrote earlier, I will honestly read 3-4 chapters, if you like more chapters. And so I begin to share my thoughts - 1 chapter: The first lines of the chapter reminded me of the movie "Equals" - there was a similar plot. In the 21st century, apparently, there is nothing original, there is always a work that was previously or created based on either a reymek or ... ... I hope that the first impressions were wrong ... we read further ... offtopic. A description of love - it looks patterned, beaten, in my opinion, the author could come up with his point of view, describe the same thing, in his own words, would be less pathetic, and more emotional. Original IMHO And then just went the same thing, a description of love, not as a stamp from the film, but its own view of the author. It's great. The first chapter carries away, forces the reader to move to the second. Chapter Two: Oh dear family squabbles, intrigues, conspiracies ... naivety as a cover for intrigue and the struggle for the throne? Intriguing! The third chapter - there are always pets and outcasts in the family, the author managed to master it. Interestingly, what is a golden package with six packs? The fourth chapter is interesting ... what happened to the heavy gold, or did the main character carry both the peasant and the gold together? Oooh ... this is pure romance ... alas, not my genre ... The author skillfully owns the word, his chapters are small, easy to read, the plot is more or less clear, clear, simple. Curious as a man who died from blood loss. suddenly was able to push the main character, so that he fell? Good luck to the author.

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The Emperor who loves me dearly

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Thank you for the detailed review! I never heard the movie but I've searched the synopsis and indeed there is quite a resemblance. I can assure you that it is purely coincidental. Thank you for mentioning it! Good luck to you too author!

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Mutually, we are both authors and readers and critics. But criticizing oneself is more difficult, being objective to oneself is more difficult than to others. But I try to be objective to all and to myself too))) Successes us in creativity!

_escapist:Thank you for the detailed review! I never heard the movie but I've searched the synopsis and indeed there is quite a resemblance. I can assure you that it is purely coincidental. Thank you for mentioning it! Good luck to you too author!