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Elfriedenn
ElfriedennAuthor4yrElfriedenn

Hello Again! I read my last review, and it was too long so I've decided to change it. This is the first novel that I've written, and you will see a lot of things that you might not like. I will just say that I will try to write better every day. Next would be, if you are reading this, just enjoy the novel. If you're fine with it, continue reading and vote for the novel with Power Stones! If you don't like it, find other novels that you like or maybe DM me on discord for your suggestions/corrections. ==================== My website where you can read my latest chapters: Elfriedenn.home.blog There are around five free chapters available in there! If you want to read more than 15 Locked Advance Chapters in my website, you can find the Password on my Patreón: Patreón.com/Elfriedenn Note: Please read the tags in the description before reading. There are incest, rape, and many more tags in there. In case you get magically surprised, not expecting it. Discord: http://discord.gg/PdgErwK (If you have good suggestions and stuff, join here! Talking about how they hate the incest in my novel and useless things like that will be kicked from the group)

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The Lust System

Elfriedenn

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PaidThePrice
PaidThePriceLv11PaidThePrice

Why is there a gay MC tag?

Bartzabel
BartzabelLv11Bartzabel

He's gay? I haven't read of him fcking a guy yet...

PaidThePrice:Why is there a gay MC tag?
_CoffeeCat_
_CoffeeCat_Lv4_CoffeeCat_

It is just a troll tag. The author mentioned it in the description.

PaidThePrice:Why is there a gay MC tag?
SkittleRayne
SkittleRayneLv10SkittleRayne

Remove the Gay Male lead tag!!! people are to cruel. I do think my number one thing I could ask of you is that you make the male lead more confident and less naive

Lazy2Name_2
Lazy2Name_2Lv5Lazy2Name_2

Hey is this novel banned now?

sadeeq123
sadeeq123Lv13sadeeq123

Will do just that

sadeeq123
sadeeq123Lv13sadeeq123

Will do just that

Sadras
SadrasLv5Sadras

Sex

Sadras
SadrasLv5Sadras

😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

legnar
legnarLv3legnar

Love your work mate got to chpter 60 atm its relly fun to read :D keep it up mate

raktim
raktimLv5raktim

hey why i can't read the chapters here🤔🤔. can someone help me

Elijah_Pearson
Elijah_PearsonLv13Elijah_Pearson

Great job with your novel. It’s a great read even though it’s your first novel written. Keep up the great work!

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14Malcolm_Massey

Just to let you know someone has a exact copy of your book on web novel. With only like 50 chapters. Same name just in caps. It's sad that they are taking your book for themselves.

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14Malcolm_Massey

It looks like the person that was copying your book either deleted it or got it taken down. Your welcome 👍

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14Malcolm_Massey

Hey just to let you know there is another book that is a copy of your book. It's called ( lust system ) and has over 60 chapters.

KilLaRuNa
KilLaRuNaLv4KilLaRuNa

Nyaa!!!!

TonhaoSpawn
TonhaoSpawnLv6TonhaoSpawn

more more more

Dator_David
Dator_DavidLv13Dator_David

You do know some of us can't get on that site?

Dator_David
Dator_DavidLv13Dator_David

Managed to get on the site however I can not find any of the author's I'm following

From_Below_4ReL
From_Below_4ReLLv11From_Below_4ReL

Ok