This novel is written by a middle schooler. The plot is really dumb and keeps getting dumber as the story goes on, even hentai has plot that makes more sense than this. The authors attempts at fixing his protagonist with self-analysis monologues completely ruins the novel, instead of showing character development he just gives ****ty monologues (such as when he talks about being picky with his women but also he randomly rapes girls in the starting 10 chapters). The fact that his entire family knows about the system and that there's "another side of society" that the MC doesn't know about is also retarded. This should have stayed as a lust novel, sadly it's spiraling into random autism.
Elfriedenn
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