Review Detail of Jaykay2307 in True Shinobi
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Okay only read the prologue so I'm only gonna give it a half full or half empty rating as I just have some things to say, Ninja didn't use katana they were too long. Also I know you wanted people to fear him, but ninjas real names only get famous after they die. Even hattori Hanzo the most famous ninja was only a title for the leader of the hattori ninja clan. Also big no no letting a guard get to the boss to tell on you. Even bigger no no, killing seemingly everybody, shinobi would only kill others if there wasn't another way of doing the assassination which would cause less deaths as they thought it was cruel to kills so many to get to one.
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My ninja is different, but he definitely was effective back then, but he found society expose of info in the world, my Ninja is more of an inactive, he acted lousier, he carelessly gave too much info of himself, he has the feeling that he doesn't care if lived anymore or not, people expect a great assassin that does missions effectively, but I gave them the opposite impression. But I thank you for the Review. :D
Hayabusa chooses his weapons, he doesn't care if it does the mission effectively, I know my knowledge of ninjas, but I would have different ninja.
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Seer_:My ninja is different, but he definitely was effective back then, but he found society expose of info in the world, my Ninja is more of an inactive, he acted lousier, he carelessly gave too much info of himself, he has the feeling that he doesn't care if lived anymore or not, people expect a great assassin that does missions effectively, but I gave them the opposite impression. But I thank you for the Review. :D
Seer_:I said acts more like a shinobi when serious, I don't have to repeat myself
Seer_:I said acts more like a shinobi when serious, I don't have to repeat myself
Seer_:I said acts more like a shinobi when serious, I don't have to repeat myself
Seer_:I said acts more like a shinobi when serious, I don't have to repeat myself