Review Detail of Evil_For_the_WIN in HSDXD X NANATSU (DROP)

Review at chapter 10 The grammar is thrown away. You have to read some paragraphs 5 times before understanding what it is conveying. But he's re-editing, I think. The updates seem stable (1chapter per week I think). The story is slow at the beginning but it's not really a "bother" (It took 5 chapters for him to be born). After that it's timeskip on timeskip, and it's kinda confusing. But the biggest let down is the amount of stupidity MC has done in 10 chapters (even if it's somehow explained). At the 10th chapter end, I don't know anymore if he's a alpha male or a beta. He's made to become friend with Issei (perso I hate Issei as much as Rias) because according to the almighty author it'll help him shape his attitude. I don't understand how befriending a child would change an ***** personality. And finally, he got the power to create sacred gear (or treasure) but he didn't use it so far. If I learned one thing from HS DXD it's that sacred gear are almighty. There's 4 named OC so far: MC, his parents and Sera-tan maid. We don't know anything about them. Zero character development. They could have been side characters a, b and c and it wouldn't have changed anything. Anyway it's the beginning it can become better. For the world, it's the world of DXD even if we haven't seen much of it yet.