Review Detail of Ispywithmyeye in HSDXD X NANATSU (DROP)

Pacing is too slow at the moment. Nothing really excites me even when I am a few chapters in. And the way u navigate the story is not fluid. Grammer and vocab wise is also quite bad. Ur phrasing of words need a lot of development and use thesauraus to help improve ur vocab. Once this story gets better, I will remove this review and give u a new 1.