Hey man! You do need to improve your writing quality. The story looks promising but the synopsis is hard to read. Do write a more detailed and better flowing synopsis so that people can get a better idea about the novel.
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LIKENah when he read it it was different I changed it shortly after that. And thank you for saying that I really appreciate feedback
Samson_Royal:What better synopsis do you need. you must be a spoiler advocate... I don't think that synopsis is hard to read. at all.