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Review Detail of Aoalbjorn in Dragon King of Apocalypse (Douluo Dalu 3)-Completed

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Aoalbjorn
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MC wastes his time instead of training. his father gets an invitation card of best school there is, the spirit pagoda. and yet he doesn't tell anything about it to MC thus he admits himself into some backwater school. He wastes his time earning money instead of becoming stronger. Must MC really as weak as the original story MC? this is a fanfic. change something. he could've at least reached rank 40 if not 50 if he diligently trained himself in a forest by the time of age 9. Why must he be weaker in rank. whats the use of being able to fight higher rank? why must he be as old as everyone else. he should atleast be many ranks higher than his peers and yet hes sometimes very lower than his peers although he can fight head on. whats the use of his useless reincarnation if he doesn't even get stronger in early age. earnling money by doing some chores and hammering metals is waste of time. even if he hunts monsters in the forest he could earn heflty some.

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Dragon King of Apocalypse (Douluo Dalu 3)-Completed

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Aoalbjorn
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I forgot what this story was about i am just here to see my old comments. how you doing guys btw? I k i m gonna get replies after a year or so. lol i am wating. it would be much better if this webnovel had chatting function

LaurentCross
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I agree completely this is a trash story it's so hard now to find a non beta mc it's literally impossible I guess the world is full of pussys now .

Aoalbjorn
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a fanfic needs to have fast pace. If original MC reached the peak of cultivation at the age of 20 then the fanfic mc needs to reach that stage at 10. Fast pace isn't timeskipping. its to grow stronger faster irrelevant to chapters released.

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Aoalbjorn
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Fanfic can have normal pace if the author is sure that he can complete the fanfic. But how many fanfic is completed? Very few fanfics are completed. 99% are dropped. If done fast paced then it would at least be completed instead of droping halfway

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Aoalbjorn
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ya, i apreciate that author didn't drop it despite many hates (like me). Enjoy it. But I really could't take the fact that MC is unable to advance fast in cultivation and his speeds is slower. I admit that his Foundation is many time stronger than main story's MC. But so what if you have so good foundation you can die easily if you dont advance fast enough. Instead of aging his rings he could gain the title dulo first then can age the rings.

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An_Anime_Addict
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Bro a fanfic doesn't need to have any type of specifications on how it should be. It's called a *fan*fic because any fan of the series could write the story as s/he wants and not on others' demands.

Aoalbjorn:a fanfic needs to have fast pace. If original MC reached the peak of cultivation at the age of 20 then the fanfic mc needs to reach that stage at 10. Fast pace isn't timeskipping. its to grow stronger faster irrelevant to chapters released.
Aoalbjorn
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so you mean to say that fanfic are allowed waste peoples time? what you are talking about is a diary writer who doesn't write for anyone just for himself for fear he would forget his dream. fanfic is something that a writer writes based on a fic for the readers, not for writer himself.

An_Anime_Addict:Bro a fanfic doesn't need to have any type of specifications on how it should be. It's called a *fan*fic because any fan of the series could write the story as s/he wants and not on others' demands.
An_Anime_Addict
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Bro, Fanfic writers write it for both themselves and the readers and moreover if you feel that a fanfic is wasting your time then just drop it. Its not like the writers earn anything for writing fanfics and even if they do through P*treon or similar means, unless you yourself pay them then there is not really a need to pressurise them, after all its their story~

Aoalbjorn:so you mean to say that fanfic are allowed waste peoples time? what you are talking about is a diary writer who doesn't write for anyone just for himself for fear he would forget his dream. fanfic is something that a writer writes based on a fic for the readers, not for writer himself.
Aoalbjorn
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How m i supposed understand wheather or not the novel is good without reading? And once I understand that the novel is a "Big Pit" Then I alread read hundred chapters... I can go back in time... perhaps.

An_Anime_Addict:Bro, Fanfic writers write it for both themselves and the readers and moreover if you feel that a fanfic is wasting your time then just drop it. Its not like the writers earn anything for writing fanfics and even if they do through P*treon or similar means, unless you yourself pay them then there is not really a need to pressurise them, after all its their story~
An_Anime_Addict
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Bro who cares anyway, and you are replying to something i posted 5 months ago so i dont even know what the hell happened in this comment section 🤷🏻‍♂️

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An_Anime_Addict
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Its been such a long time and time changes people, and so, now i dont care😂

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JUST_A_NORMAL_GUY
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I honestly don't think this story is a waste of time, it's actually pretty good. And Tang Ziran didn't mention the spirit pagoda information because of 2 reasons that can be found out later: *SPOILER ALERT* 1. Like you can see clearly in the beginning of the story, Tang Wulin(Acnologia) doesn't really cares about what others think as you can see when he ignores the spirit master who awakens his spirit and how he jut walk pass his father as if nothing happened. 2. Actually, Tang Wulin adoctive parents didn't want him to became a spirit master because they know he is a God's son and want him to live the most normal life as possible as he could, but then realized that his son is destined to become someone great and that they couldn't do anything to stop that fate, so when they saw that they were just burdens for him, they went to another continent to not bother him

Aoalbjorn:so you mean to say that fanfic are allowed waste peoples time? what you are talking about is a diary writer who doesn't write for anyone just for himself for fear he would forget his dream. fanfic is something that a writer writes based on a fic for the readers, not for writer himself.
Kurigohan
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This fic completed btw

Aoalbjorn:Fanfic can have normal pace if the author is sure that he can complete the fanfic. But how many fanfic is completed? Very few fanfics are completed. 99% are dropped. If done fast paced then it would at least be completed instead of droping halfway
MAIDENLESS
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yikes

Aoalbjorn:I forgot what this story was about i am just here to see my old comments. how you doing guys btw? I k i m gonna get replies after a year or so. lol i am wating. it would be much better if this webnovel had chatting function
inofensivo_02br
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Aoalbjorn:I forgot what this story was about i am just here to see my old comments. how you doing guys btw? I k i m gonna get replies after a year or so. lol i am wating. it would be much better if this webnovel had chatting function