Review Detail of Little_Sapling in Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon

I have a whole lot to say about this fic, but nobody wants to read long ass paragraphs for a review, so here you go: Things I like about the fic : + it's written in a summarized way that I felt smooth and enjoyable to read + a cool headed protagonist, plans well and is clearly partly sociopathic + the author has included romance, but very limited and superficial + the grammar and descriptions are suprisingly good in some parts + magic power is cultivated similar to chinese cultivation novels + a healthy dose of face slapping and scheming + the story has an undertone of extreme rationality that agrees w me + no romance with very underage girls (thank god) + he hides his power as much as possible (a personal preference) + the author basically time-skips to the 4th HP book (I prefer this) Things I dislike about the fic : + my main issue is that the protagonist overexplains his though process to other characters through conversation; it lets us, the audience, in on his reasoning, but would be very akward and patronizing during an actual conversation; it gives me second hand embarrassment + the grammar and descriptions are suprisingly mediocre in other parts + it very often feels as though everything is too convenient for the protagonist and a lot of plot issues that progress the story solve themselves that way (e.g. he finds a ritual in his family library that unlike other rituals doesn't require personal sacrifice right when he needed it) + the romantic interactions are terrible, but the author is likely aware it is not his forté + it is admittedly a bit too smooth sailing for the protagonist These are just my personal thoughts. I thought it was great for WebNovel.com standards and therefore gave it 4 stars. On fanfiction.net though the standards are higher and the scores would be lower. Like if you think this is useful! See ya!! xoxo