Review Detail of Ji_Yidao in The charming wizard prince

Item: The charming wizard prince
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

Ji_YidaoLv135yrJi_Yidao

I understand that you are new so I will be lenient. Your novel sucks. You have no commas, no punctuation and your story telling needs to be spaced out, not giant blocks of text. You need to take out all of the authors notes you put in parentheses and maybe put one at the end of a chapter instead of multiple in the middle of the story. Stop putting "he said" or any "said" at all. We only need the quotation marks. Look at other novels and see how they format theirs.

The charming wizard prince

wiseman

Liked it!

Replies5

wisemanAuthorwiseman

Tnx I Will try this in my future chapters and sorry for wasting your time. I will try my best!

5yr

wisemanAuthorwiseman

And don't be lenient with me I want to know what is wrong with my novel so that I can improve. It will be better for future novels. So complain away because I am an idiot and need to learn english better 😄

5yr

wisemanAuthorwiseman

5yr

Zephir_Lv5Zephir_

Uou, você é incrível autor. E pensar que você aceitaria uma crítica dessa forma... Eu te respeito cara

5yr

Ji_YidaoLv13Ji_Yidao

Don't get me wrong the plot is a little cliche but it does catch ones eye. Just work on the formatting.

wiseman:And don't be lenient with me I want to know what is wrong with my novel so that I can improve. It will be better for future novels. So complain away because I am an idiot and need to learn english better 😄

5yr