Your novel is actually quite good to read but your treatment of the female characters that you come up with is irrelevant and very disrespectful by leaving them after you take their V Cards. It's like you squeeze sugarcane juice then dump the pulp. Yes this is just a story for fun but you take the female character from another original novel so at least respect that by making them able to be with the MC to his world because otherwise it's the same you don't respect the creator of the character [original author]. For example give a mission MC with a Reward that he can mark his women and can take them to MC's world I was very annoyed at you author, when the MC continued to mess with other female characters but then forgot about it.
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