Review Detail of Angel_Xyo in Mystical Passage

AUTHOR UPVOTES HIMSELF HUE HUE Thank you guys for reading mt fist novel, i understand that there are many grammar and spelling errors present, but plesse bear with it and point it out so i can both improve in my future writing and also to ameliorate your reading experiences. This novel is mainly about a pretty OP female main character. If this is your style, pls read it ul !