Writing Quality : Good vocabulary and expression. nothing no to say here so. 5 star . Stability of update : 5 star can't say much about this one lmao. Story Development : 4 Just because the story is slow but the rest is ok i guess. Character design : I was hoping i was mistaken but it's a harem so cliche woman with the first one being the one he love REALLY, no matter how much you say he love the other or other bull**** he still love dongmei the most and i can't believe you can love other woman lmao it's just because harem are more popular. You can see the character development too but still when the first fucking girl who has a strong personality beginning to accept the fucking harem you can't help but tell yourself "WTF WAS THERE A NEED TO HER FUCKING PERSONALITY IS SHE LOSE IT BECAUSE HAREM POWER LMAO I DROP" which i did myself. 2 Star World Background : You know NOTHING even after 189 chapter ok ? so 2 star because the world is just like the fucking earth although i won't ask to recreate it try to make it a more original with less cliche. As for the "mysterious design" just stop it make the story boring having to fucking wait for probably some cliche secret. ** : For the harem i'm not against but still there is a limit in some novel there is reason but there the mc KNOW that if he act like that then every fucking girl will fall for him but he continue to act and then is surprised and then because of some crocodile tear he will betray the "so-called love" he has for the FC lead for ffs what is wrong with author mind about love, only kid can think about it like that.. In the end cliche story with cliche harem with cliche girl with cliche personality..................... Oh and don't try to delete him idiot author i will save it and repost it again and again to warn people again this story ! Oh and because it wasn't worth spending money or anything i read it on a piracy site ! Hope you are well then ;) Goodbye and try to make a better story without harem if you can't make one that is really good or just don't make romance when you don't have experience about it ! Number of repost : 1 ;)
Piokilek
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LIKE0Akai0:Moreover in tag you put "Loyal Lovers" Loyal mean only one. The story in fact is good but really the Harem is either it's ultra cool or it just ruin the story. In your case : sigh
as i said i will keep trying to read but just so that you can understand i pay what is worth being paid and your novel isn't worth for the moment hope you enjoy writing Mr.Author.
Piokilek:Have fun with other novels.
If its not worth then don't read. Simple. There is no need to tell me all that just to bring me down. Saying my novel is not worth to read just makes me want to do harem even more. Just saying.
0Akai0:as i said i will keep trying to read but just so that you can understand i pay what is worth being paid and your novel isn't worth for the moment hope you enjoy writing Mr.Author.
Plz do/keep harem. At this point in the novel I'd be heartbroken for all the girls (except for Dongmei) if it wasn't a harem. Keep doing what you're doing. This is my favourite novel.
Piokilek:If its not worth then don't read. Simple. There is no need to tell me all that just to bring me down. Saying my novel is not worth to read just makes me want to do harem even more. Just saying.
Sigh As i was saying it's not worth paid to read it but it's still worth reading and the "Saying my novel is not worth to read just makes me want to do harem even more. Just saying." is childish act which make me understand even more as to why the romance seem fake with the other girl than Dongmei.
Piokilek:If its not worth then don't read. Simple. There is no need to tell me all that just to bring me down. Saying my novel is not worth to read just makes me want to do harem even more. Just saying.
Just say you don't want to pay for reading and be done with it. What's the point of saying its not worth this and that. It only makes me annoyed. Its okay if someone doesnt like the book but to read and say its not worth paying but I will still read is ridiculous. You never paid for any books so what books are worth paying? Sorry but I dont want to see that in my notifications just to ruin my day. If you like it read if you dont, dont read. There is no need to speak bull**** like this. Bye.
0Akai0:Sigh As i was saying it's not worth paid to read it but it's still worth reading and the "Saying my novel is not worth to read just makes me want to do harem even more. Just saying." is childish act which make me understand even more as to why the romance seem fake with the other girl than Dongmei.
hahahahaah he really think everyone is like him. I really like the novel the way it is SO please author keep it up!!!
Piokilek:If its not worth then don't read. Simple. There is no need to tell me all that just to bring me down. Saying my novel is not worth to read just makes me want to do harem even more. Just saying.
DollaClasher:Plz do/keep harem. At this point in the novel I'd be heartbroken for all the girls (except for Dongmei) if it wasn't a harem. Keep doing what you're doing. This is my favourite novel.