I was enjoying the setting of the story quite a bit, and as a harem novel, despite him seeming faithful to the first love interest, I am not opposed to him finding more. The issue with this is that both of the women he is involved with were forced onto him. The first one was due to him being told to seduce a women or his soul would be consumed, and the second women is a literal succubus who forcefully charmed him and then attempted to erase his memories. Even after that, even after claiming devout loyalty to his first woman, he then plays it off like it's no big deal, with 0 intentions to retaliate or have anger towards this woman. It feels ridiculously forced, and completely fake. Not going to bother reading anything after that
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