Review Detail of Niffy_K8 in Taming The Las Vegas Playboy (18+)

ur story is interesting but when you wrote dis story u only focused on the main character love story u didn't really write about the other character lot story like amiya and bernado. u left us in suspense not knowing what will have to them next. when u write you don't only think as a writer but also has a reader. even when you are worried about the length of d book try ur best and incorporate other character love story there except if u are writing another story entirely about them then u tell us d title of d book. overall ur book is still interesting but when next u are writing think as a reader and not only as a writer 😉😉