Review Detail of goodlion in Divine Talent Born Mortal

what is the novel's cultivation system? I still did not get it

Your english doesnt seem so bad, so why is the english in the story so bad? It is partly because you need editors. But it looks like it was written by google translate or someone who doesnt speak english well. Its not about editing. Its got so much broken english that should not be there because from what i can tell your english is fine in this comment, and going off that you would expect grammatical errors, not just down right bad and broken english that makes it impossible for native speakers to read.

I’ll help if you still need it.

Es harén?

I have never complained about grammar as mistakes would happen. But this novel doesn't look like any mistake or something like that. It looks like complete machine translation with a bit of editing here and there.

I would honestly love to help edit this novel. It seems like a nice novel and I do have some spare time during the holidays, I’m still in high school, so I won’t really be free after the holidays but yea, I’d lobe to contribute!

Send me a massage if you still want an editor.

The MC Will have a wife or Harém?

I really want to help edit be happy with sports it’s a pleasant read but the vocabulary holds it back reply u I f you need editor ☺️

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If you still need an editor send me a message. I will be pleased to oblige

Bro the chapters and English make no sense at all you need to make a lot of improvements I can help you if you're still here