Review Detail of Better_Name in The Strongest Omni Traveler

Item: The Strongest Omni Traveler
Rating: 1.6

Review detail

Better_NameLv55yrBetter_Name

It’s really bad the main character is too op and every girl seems to just like him because he’s hot or some **** it’s really bad. Then outta nowhere he makes some plot where his wife and god his father in law were kidnapped or something resulting in the mc becoming a half-assed avenger who want strength but doesn’t even do anything he has no personality and just follows the system and then there’s the harem problem with there being so much speech from those extra clutter characters (Natsu grey happy and now jack sparrow) that the chapters look longer then they really are it’s has no substance he has no goals everything is just stupid it’s like watching first graders acting out a play with them getting lines wrong

The Strongest Omni Traveler

Magnus08

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Replies9

Natsu_Dragneel_5167Lv1Natsu_Dragneel_5167

hey don't disrespect the work of someone else

11mth

Magnus08AuthorMagnus08

Why do you sound like the most ignorant one? Where did you read 'Kidnapped?' 'Avenger?' 'No Goals?' Dude, let me ask, did you even read properly or are you just that dumb and ignorant?

5yr

ZeroXIIILv4ZeroXIII

i wonder how many times you were dropped on your head when you were a baby , and if you are so good write your own novel noob

5yr

GoldenFateCoinLv4GoldenFateCoin

Why does he need to write one himself, just because he is criticizing the story? Wtf?

ZeroXIII:i wonder how many times you were dropped on your head when you were a baby , and if you are so good write your own novel noob

4yr

GoldenFateCoinLv4GoldenFateCoin

Why does he need to write one himself, just because he is criticizing the story? Wtf?

ZeroXIII:i wonder how many times you were dropped on your head when you were a baby , and if you are so good write your own novel noob

4yr

JohnnieWalkerLv4JohnnieWalker

this novel tops as being one of the worst ones

4yr

DarkMeowLv4DarkMeow

Don't listen to their nonsense, just think that the wind continues your story

Magnus08:Why do you sound like the most ignorant one? Where did you read 'Kidnapped?' 'Avenger?' 'No Goals?' Dude, let me ask, did you even read properly or are you just that dumb and ignorant?

4yr

CreatorOfSystemaLv3CreatorOfSystema

its called omni thats why its op

1yr

NoNameDaoLv5NoNameDao

a fking mid fanfic

Magnus08:Why do you sound like the most ignorant one? Where did you read 'Kidnapped?' 'Avenger?' 'No Goals?' Dude, let me ask, did you even read properly or are you just that dumb and ignorant?

2mth