Greetings Author, This story is very interesting. Thank you for your creativity and adding life to my reading horizon. What I would like to encourage is correcting typos,grammar and the person perspectives in the story. Differentiate between His/her, her/him. I've seen a few errors that need attention. Overall I'm satisfied with this story and understand what you are implying, but that may not pass with other readers who will trash your art with bad words, and I want your ratings to succeed just how you want them to. I want to see this story grow. It's getting juicy and we readers love juicy 👀👀👏👏👍
Sofia05
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