Review Detail of Adelasorra in Teen Wolf with the Fenris Wolf
Review detail
So far it is written in a rushed and flippant manner. Everything is wrapping itself up to be as cliche as possible. Honestly, if the author doesn't get his *hit together I would recommend not wasting your time on this one.
Teen Wolf with the Fenris Wolf
Orionwashere
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HappyKatchu:It's not because you say "have a good day" that your message isn't toxic. So much hatred for only a bad review. It makes you seem immature, unpleasant and arrogant. I will not read this fic because of that, sorry. Learn from that and grow up a little bit.
Your story so far looks like a pure mesh up of other peoples fan fictions. Let me guess what will happen next. He'll meet with the main characters and set up a harem. He'll probably have Alison, Lydia, and Maliah. Maybe you'll surprise us with with some other side girl, or even go for Kate. Next you'll have him become so op and bad ass that he become the leader of Scott and the team. All of this has already been seen and done. If you want to prove me wrong then please be my guest, I'll wait.
Orionwashere:And the Summery says Cliche Death...
Wow... you're wrong about everything except meeting the manic characters but that's just cause it's a fan fiction... I'm not that big on harems usually, Maybe a Little Flirting here and there, I had already set up a romance list for all the manin characters too, and yeah fan fictions tend to get meshed up with one another when people think along the same lines... if you dont like such ideas dont read fan fic... now onto "OP" **** you said yeah the mc will be OP because I want him to be, but i also want there to be a story sooo no he won't be straight up dominating everything... your just an asshole bud... now then I understand your just on your period and **** but dont put that Sh*it on others you Cu*nt... have a good day and please dont read, respond, or comment on any of my novels or anything I do in the future.
Adelasorra:Your story so far looks like a pure mesh up of other peoples fan fictions. Let me guess what will happen next. He'll meet with the main characters and set up a harem. He'll probably have Alison, Lydia, and Maliah. Maybe you'll surprise us with with some other side girl, or even go for Kate. Next you'll have him become so op and bad ass that he become the leader of Scott and the team. All of this has already been seen and done. If you want to prove me wrong then please be my guest, I'll wait.
the story itself is not bad, but with a toxic author and a child like that... you can be sure that I won't read any more of his stories... (which only 1 passed 10 chapters because you don't have the strength to will at least try)
Orionwashere:Wow... you're wrong about everything except meeting the manic characters but that's just cause it's a fan fiction... I'm not that big on harems usually, Maybe a Little Flirting here and there, I had already set up a romance list for all the manin characters too, and yeah fan fictions tend to get meshed up with one another when people think along the same lines... if you dont like such ideas dont read fan fic... now onto "OP" **** you said yeah the mc will be OP because I want him to be, but i also want there to be a story sooo no he won't be straight up dominating everything... your just an asshole bud... now then I understand your just on your period and **** but dont put that Sh*it on others you Cu*nt... have a good day and please dont read, respond, or comment on any of my novels or anything I do in the future.
It's not because you say "have a good day" that your message isn't toxic. So much hatred for only a bad review. It makes you seem immature, unpleasant and arrogant. I will not read this fic because of that, sorry. Learn from that and grow up a little bit.
Orionwashere:Wow... you're wrong about everything except meeting the manic characters but that's just cause it's a fan fiction... I'm not that big on harems usually, Maybe a Little Flirting here and there, I had already set up a romance list for all the manin characters too, and yeah fan fictions tend to get meshed up with one another when people think along the same lines... if you dont like such ideas dont read fan fic... now onto "OP" **** you said yeah the mc will be OP because I want him to be, but i also want there to be a story sooo no he won't be straight up dominating everything... your just an asshole bud... now then I understand your just on your period and **** but dont put that Sh*it on others you Cu*nt... have a good day and please dont read, respond, or comment on any of my novels or anything I do in the future.