This is a great story. I like the slow build up. The trial and error the character goes through to figure things out. However, sometimes he seems to have a limited view of what he is capable of that is irritating. But then you remember what he is trying to keep secret. Also, I had thought not explaining to his parents was a bad idea. But given how they disregard his wishes and even let strangers into an area he had forbidden them from entering. He is going to have to start taking security into consideration.
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