Review Detail of frostogre in Because it's only you

This novel is already laying a firm foundation for future development. The story seems well thought out and at 4 chapters is already entertaining. There are some glaring grammatical issues and a number of run on sentences. You can tell that English is not the author's first language. All of that aside it looks like an interesting read. I will continue reading to better see the release stability and also to see the interactions between the MC's. You should try to improve your sentence structure a little bit but you should definitely keep up the good work.