Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in Because it's only you

The first chapter immediately going wild emotions ... But the splice goes action ... do not pull the cat by the tail. This is a plus. The second chapter is realistic, on emotions. Good text, IMHO. It is easy to read, the meaning of the story is clear. Romance. The third chapter is a very no pleasant feeling when you lose something, especially the phone. The author would have to reflect this, loss of feelings ... how it happens ... with a person ... in my not professional opinion. Probably, even a cultured person, even a girl in such a situation probably still expressed herself with stronger words ... although maybe in the West young ladies are all such intellectuals ?! Who knows? The fourth chapter - intrigue rolls)))) Thank you, the author, apparently his novel will be interesting. Simple language. Short sentences. Short chapters. But everything is clear. Overall rating 4 out of 5! Why? Few chapters! Interesting, intriguing ... Success in creative work! As they say in Russian - brevity is the sister of talent!