Review Detail of Tinalynge in Because it's only you

There were 4 chapters at the point of this review. Writing Quality: There are a few grammatical mistakes. As this is the first attempt at writing, it is to be expected that it takes time and experience to get a flow going when writing. Although there are a few times where you get slightly taken out of the story, it does not take you long to enter the created universe again. Stability of updates: I read all four chapters in one go, but from looking at the update dates, it seems as if it does take a bit of time for chapters to be updated, but that is to be expected as well of a new writer. Story development: I quite like the premise and the plot so far. Of course, it is quite a bit too early to say exactly what is going to happen, but it is very enjoyable so far. I will definitely be glad to continue following it. Character design: Again, it is very soon to say anything special about the characters. They are likeable and I enjoy following them, but I do not know how long it will take for me to get more familiar with them. World background: Once more, it is a bit too early to say anything, but what has been shown is quite familiar and quite well explained