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Review Detail of DarkWe in Because it's only you

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Writing Quality 5/5 What can I say? It's pretty much as fluent as one can go. I can understand the story and its progression. Small grammar mistakes but everyone makes those. Stability of Updates 3/5 Now don't get me wrong, this story has 3 chapters atm. But I can see that there was a pretty solid gap between chapter releases. I myself am also not good with stability hehe so don't take it as something bad. Story Development 4/5 Whilst it is pretty fluent, I sometimes have trouble finding my way back in the story. Could it be the sentence layout? I don't know. The story progresses at just the right pace and has lots of elements to keep you bussy. Character Design 4/5 I love that the MC has the same goals as me. I love programming and do so everyday. The other charachters are a little less fleshed out though. No worries, it's easy to just add a few unique lines to each of them to make them stand out more. World Background 4/5 While the story focuses on the world that influences the MC, I'm pretty sure that's all that is required for this story to work. Some details could be described better, I can't remember which ones though. Conclusion: whilst the chapters have a gap, this story still shows lots of potential in being a gem.

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